Promo Email / Revised draft

Nitin

Thank you for sending draft

I took a close look at it from the perspective of the recipient and then revised it as follows. Does this look ok to you ?

One thing we will need to do before sending out this email is to substantially increase the font size of the link “ Edit Resume “ ( and the other two links as well ), when a candidate logs in.

At present, these are hardly visible.

regards

hemen parekh

hcp@RecruitGuru.com  [ Res ]

hcparekh@RecruitGuru.com  [ Off ]

Jobs  for  All  =  Peace  on  Earth

Promo  Email to be sent to each candidate

Subject line :  Is this Your Resume ? / Name / Birth Date / Mobile Number

Dear Executive :

We do have your record ( - though somewhat incomplete ), on

                              www.CustomizeResume.com

But we do not have your detailed TEXT RESUME.

Now, if you take just 2 minutes to upload your text resume, you can ( but not otherwise ) :

Ø  Search 260,000 jobs and “ Apply Online “

Ø  Blast your resume to 50,000 + employers / recruiters

Ø  Pull job alerts on your mobile and apply against any alert, directly from your mobile ( no need for a PC / Internet ! )

Just login at   www.CustomizeResume.com   using your :

>       User Id  = --------------------------

>     Password = ------------------------

Then click on “ Edit Resume “ link and upload your TEXT RESUME ( minimum 500 characters and in  .doc  format only ), at “Resume Details “.

Thereafter, you will never need to visit any job-portal.

And all of our services to you are absolutely FREE !

With regards

www.CustomizeResume.com