Dear Jayesh,
# Proof reading
After making corrections ( all minor ), I have , earlier already returned to you, ENGLISH poems
I just completed correcting the HINDI poems
Now I await GUJARATI proofs
# Titles of books
English > Ripples
Gujarati > લાવારસ
Hindi > पतझड
# Front Cover Picture / Photo
English > As per
Gujarati > Picture of volcano ( which currently appears on Hindi manuscript )
Hindi > Picture / photo of Autumn , showing a winding lane through the jungle
# Rear of Back Cover
English > Poem titled , “ Ripples in the ocean “[ https://poemseng.blogspot.com/
Gujarati > Poem titled , લાવારસ નો અનંગ [ https://hcpspoems.blogspot.
Hindi > Poem titled , क्या राज़ हैं ? [ https://poemshn.blogspot.com/
These are my suggestions . I welcome your’s / Divya’s suggestions
Regards,
Hemen-masa
From: easternpress [mailto:mail@easternpress.net]
Sent: Saturday, October 19, 2019 5:22 PM
To: Hemen Parekh
Subject: Re: FW: Layout of Poems
Hello Hemenmasa
Hope you are doing well,
Just saw your mail, it went in spam folder, i have texted Visheshbhai & that i will be giving him printouts tomorrow so you may get proper idea of size & fonts.
Regards
JAYESH N. DAVE
EASTERN PRINTING PRESS
Regd.Office: 56, CRESCENT CHAMBERS
TAMARIND LANE, FORT MUMBAI : 400001
Tel: (91-22) 2265 5467/4002 5467
Work: Gala no 8/9 Shah & Nahar Ind. Est.
Sitaram Jadhav Marg, Lower Parel
Mumbai : 400013
Tel: (91-22) 2496 3668/69
On Sat, Oct 19, 2019 at 9:57 AM Hemen Parekh <hcp@recruitguru.com> wrote:
Dear Jayesh,
Many thanks for your prompt initiative
Layout looks just fine and fonts are very legible except in case of Gujarati version where the fonts appear somewhat “ thick “ !
In Gujarati version, adjacent words seem to be touching each other and cannot be distinguished as stand-alone
Can you pl let me know the size of the paper in mm ( width x height ) ?
Centralizing the text is a very good idea but breaks ( gaps ) between the stanzas will need to be gone through to preserve the context of the thought being expressed
As far as the : Date of the poem : is concerned , it may remain in the centre but could we print it , a little lower and in slightly lower fonts ?
In the meantime, I am going through the manuscripts printed in my office, for apparent mistakes / errors ( marking corrections by hand )
Vishesh thinks that the book should be divided into 3 sections, which I agree
First section could be Hindi , next Gujarati and last one English
Whereas, ( within each section ) , I am keen to arrange / sequence the poems in reverse chronology ( latest at the top and earliest – 1945 ? – at the bottom, ), Vishesh thinks otherwise !
He thinks these should be so arranged that the poems follow the order 1945 – 55- 58 – 67 – 78 etc
What do you suggest ?
Regards for Divya,
Hemen masa
From: vishesh Income Group [mailto:vishesh@incomegroup.in
]
Sent: Friday, October 18, 2019 8:11 PM
To: Hemen Parekh
Subject: Fwd: Layout of Poems
Best Regards
Vishesh Parekh
INCOME
(out of office)
From: easternpress <mail@easternpress.net>
Sent: Friday, October 18, 2019 7:53:31 PM
To: vishesh Income Group <vishesh@incomegroup.in>
Subject: Layout of Poems
Dear Vishesh bhai
Request you to check the layout & size of paper.
Regards
Jayesh N Dave
EASTERN PRINTING PRESS
Regd.Office: 56, CRESCENT CHAMBERS
TAMARIND LANE, FORT MUMBAI : 400001
Tel: (91-22) 2265 5467/4002 5467
Work: Gala no 8/9 Shah & Nahar Ind. Est.
Sitaram Jadhav Marg, Lower Parel
Mumbai : 400013
Tel: (91-22) 2496 3668/69
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