Gaurav ,
This looks fine
My only suggestions:
* Leave one space after each punctuation / asterix /
exclamation mark / question mark etc
* Increase number of paragraphs by keeping max 3/4
sentences per para
* Provide more space between paras
Warm Regards,
Hemen Parekh
(M)=91 – 98,67,55,08,08
From: gaurav kamath
[mailto:gouravkamat93@gmail.com]
Sent: Thursday, April 21, 2016 4:09 PM
To: Hemen Parekh
Subject: Re: BUSINESS PLAN
Sent: Thursday, April 21, 2016 4:09 PM
To: Hemen Parekh
Subject: Re: BUSINESS PLAN
Dear Sir,
I have not tried to change any essence of your article and
have tried to keep its originality in my blog.
Kindly go through my article where have taken your excerpt
of 10 million entrepreneurs.
Thanks and Regards,
Gaurav kamath
Dear Sir,
Thanks a lot for the information Sir. I am grateful for your
continuous support and looking forward to write an article on B2B.
Thanks and Regards,
Gaurav Kamath
On Thu, Apr 21, 2016 at 10:00 AM, Hemen Parekh <hcp@recruitguru.com>
wrote:
Gaurav,
May
be you noticed that on B2B , our revenue model is
to charge the sender ( subscriber ) , Rs 0.20
per email message blasted
For
this, we have provided page....Re-Charge
Your Account
In
order to motivate the visitors to register ( and become Subscribers ) , we are
offering a joining bonus of 1000 emails ( = messages blasted ) FREE
A box
in the left side Navigation Panel , shows :
*Your
Credit Balance
In
Rupees..........
In No of Emails...
In No of Emails...
This
figure goes on decreasing as blasting continues
Once
this Joining Bonus gets exhausted , Subscriber has to recharge his account
As to
how you can use this FREE bonus :
There
are 396 Companies listed ( in our database ) in Mangalore
You
can blast your message to them from,
As
far as the story goes , I will do so as soon as I find time
In
the meantime , I await your blog re B2B
Warm Regards,
Hemen Parekh
(M)=91 – 98,67,55,08,08
To: Hemen Parekh
Subject: Re: BUSINESS PLAN
Dear
Sir,
I
will write about the b2bmessageblaster in my bog, my query is I wanted to know
regarding 1000 free emails. How will it help me Sir? How shall I harness the
resource?
Sir
it would be a great help if you could write an article on my blog regarding
startups in order to motivate readers.
Thanks
and Regards,
Gaurav,
Pl do
write about B2B web site and send me link
Especially
about page / feature " Influence Policy Makers "
You
must have noticed that , upon REGISTERING
, any person gets a Joining Bonus of 1000
emails FREE
This
could be of special interest to Start Ups
You
must have also noticed the ACTUAL messages that have been blasted by B2B
subscribers at,
Start
ups who wish to export their products /
services to Buyers abroad , can make use of,
In
their message , they can request those Chamber Presidents , to forward their
email ( Marketing Message ) to its Member Firms
, running into 500,000 + all over the World !
hcp
PS :
Entire
process is described , schematically at,
Did
you try out DEMO yourself ?
From: gaurav kamath
[mailto:gouravkamat93@gmail.com]
Sent: Wednesday, April 20, 2016 7:47 PM
To: Hemen Parekh
Subject: Re: BUSINESS PLAN
Sent: Wednesday, April 20, 2016 7:47 PM
To: Hemen Parekh
Subject: Re: BUSINESS PLAN
Dear
Sir,
Your
website www.B2BmessageBlaster.com
is very interesting and full of knowledge, Can I write an article on that? So
that people can get to know How digital India is working.
Thanks
and Regards,
Gaurav
kamath
Dear
Sir,
Thanks
for providing such a massive data of Startups and this will help me to enhance
my blog with new startup stories.
Regarding
Business Plans I will do as you say Sir. It's pleasure to have interaction with
a Corporate Leader like you Sir.
Thanks
and Regards,
Gaurav
kamath
Gaurav,
I
suppose VCs do ask for a Business Plan , when a Start up seeks funds
Here is one that I had prepared some 15 years back
Since
than many things have changed , including the business environment , technology
and , above all , the severe competition among several thousand start ups
So
, if anything , if you plan on approaching a VC for funds , then you will need
to come up with something much better !
hcp
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