RE: B2B Updates

Satish

Thanks

" Dear Pallavi " has come out quite nice

But , we need to improve " Ease of Doing Business " , cosmetically

At a no of places , presentation can improve by increasing vertical spacing / paragraphing / bullet points etc

Also provide more space after   >      ..... , to improve legibility

Remember , this page is designed to be publicized among Foreign Companies ( thru my promo emails )

They will click this link ( in my promo emails ) and land on this page

It will be their FIRST IMPRESSION of our web site

If that impression is WOW ! , then they will feel like reading other pages

I would request you to do your VERY BEST to make Foreigners WANT to read this entire page

hcp

From: nitin.ruge [mailto:nitin.ruge@sentientsystems.net]
Sent: Tuesday, February 03, 2015 12:45 PM
To: Parekh, Hemen
Cc: shuklendu.baji@sentientsystems.net
Subject: B2B Updates

Dear Sir,

 

Below changes are done & uploaded on server

1. World Wide Wall page text correction - added space between " COMPOSEyour "
2. Ease of Doing Business - New Page
3. Dear Pallavi - New Page

Regards,
Satish