Nitin
Thank you
for sending draft
I took a
close look at it from the perspective of the recipient and then revised it as
follows. Does this look ok to you ?
One thing
we will need to do before sending out this email is to substantially increase
the font size of the link “ Edit Resume “ ( and the other two links as well ),
when a candidate logs in.
At present,
these are hardly visible.
regards
hemen
parekh
hcp@RecruitGuru.com [ Res ]
hcparekh@RecruitGuru.com [ Off
]
Jobs
for All = Peace on Earth
Promo
Email to be sent to each candidate
Subject
line : Is this Your Resume ? / Name / Birth Date / Mobile
Number
Dear
Executive :
We
do have your record ( - though somewhat incomplete ), on
But
we do not have your detailed TEXT RESUME.
Now,
if you take just 2 minutes to upload your text resume, you can ( but not
otherwise ) :
Ø Search 260,000 jobs
and “ Apply Online “
Ø Blast your resume
to 50,000 + employers / recruiters
Ø Pull job alerts on
your mobile and apply against any alert, directly from your mobile ( no need for a PC / Internet ! )
Just
login at www.CustomizeResume.com
using your :
>
User Id = --------------------------
>
Password = ------------------------
Then
click on “ Edit Resume “ link and upload
your TEXT RESUME ( minimum 500 characters and in .doc
format only ), at “Resume Details
“.
Thereafter,
you will never need to visit any job-portal.
And
all of our services to you are absolutely FREE !
With
regards
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